Year 1314
A man went a-hunting at Reigate,
And wished to leap over a high gate.
Says the owner, “Go round,
With your gun and your hound,
For you never shall leap over my gate.”
- The Hunter of Reigate
Edmund’s thoughts were full of questions as his horse carefully plodded its way down the snowy road through town. However, he did not volunteer to divulge those thoughts to the guildmaster riding ahead of him.
Unlike the majority of his guildmates, he found there to be something rather unsettling about Wilhelm Cadeyrn. He was a large bear of a man, sleepy and jovial in appearance and yet, superior in strength and speed to most of the current hunters and lethal to the beasts that he tracked.
Wilhelm was also a model leader, keeping order in an expanding guild. Edmund had noticed soon after joining, though, that those who defied Wilhelm soon found themselves left out of the more desirable and important hunts by others. Those who opposed him outside of the guild often were sold lesser choice spoils from a plentiful hunt. As far as Edmund could tell, however, these actions did not reflect the master’s wishes. Certainly, something so petty did not fit the image of the man who was considered generous to many, blessed with a saintly wife, and a pillar citizen.
But what Edmund knew that the others did not, was there was at least one person who hated the man. Mrs. Winchester hid an extraordinary level of animosity towards the guildmaster. As she was determined to maintain an outward appearance of civility between the offices of Mayor and Guildmaster, she only warned Edmund that Wilhelm was a proud man and said nothing further. He had not dug deeper on this because he did not want to unsettle the balance of affairs in this town. But Elanore was accomplishing that simply with her presence and her story. He gripped his reins, willing himself not to think about her for the moment, focusing his attention back to the guildmaster who was intent on studying the road.
What the man was studying did not become clear until after they had passed beyond the town. Wilhelm circled his horse about, bringing it back alongside the younger hunter’s own steed. “Looks as if a coach came in of some sort,” he pointed at ground, indicating a set of long grooved impressions in the snow. “Did you see one about this morning?”
Edmund now understood what had kept the man transfixed for the better part of a quarter hour. The man had been counting number and type of tracks in the snow. The guildmaster was hunting people. With that insight, he wondered what to say about his morning encounter with Elanore. He offered a statement as neutrally as he could manage, “I did see a coach from one of the outlying homes.”
Wilhelm looked further up the road, following the tracks as far as his eyes could see. “It looks like the same vehicle headed back out of town. Probably some of the folk coming to town for supplies. With the Crossroads suppliers not able to come in for a few days, I expect that some of our less prepared folk might be anxious for a bit of ale and food.”
“That may be the case,” Edmund agreed, while looking at the tracks. He was fairly certain these came from the coach that he had encountered in the morning. “The tavern was quite full during the lunch hour. “I believe that most families, however, are managing.”
“Of course they would,” the man grinned. “I’ve made sure to distribute what we can spare from our own stores. The guild takes care of this town,” he added before turning his horse back about and resuming his brisk pace down the road.
Occasionally Wilhelm would slow or pause to study the houses near the road before moving forward. It was apparent what the man was doing – taking mental notes on the comings and goings of the townspeople. He continued like this until they had arrived at the last inhabited residence before the bridge, eyeing the gate that marked the Wolfram estate. As Edmund caught up to him, Wilhelm said nothing. There was no need to note the obvious; the set of wheel tracks they had been watching had disappeared behind the heavy iron gate. Wilhelm nudged his horse forward, directing it to the bridge that lay ahead following a set of horse tracks that appeared to have gone south from this same gate.
As they approached the bridge, Edmund assessed the area. There were three distinct sets of tracks: two from riders, one from a person on foot. The guildmaster dismounted and motioned for Edmund to do the same. Edmund observed as the man knelt down slightly to look at these scattered tracks.
“It seems as if we weren’t the only ones out here,” the guildsmaster looked about, his eyes narrowing as he began visually following one fresher set of tracks down the bridge. “This other, older set,” he pointed out to Edmund, “is a smaller person, running.”
Edmund knew quite well that the smaller person was Elanore. He let his eyes wander over to the other, newer horse tracks. Quietly he followed his guildmaster as the man discovered the spot where the horse’s rider had dismounted, leaving a heavy footprint in the snow.
There was a slight awkwardness to the man’s gait. Edmund pondered that, before turning his attention to an area of snow where the rider’s tracks seemed to stop. He looked up at the stone lion statue that guarded this particular end of the bridge. “I suppose our rider spent some time here looking at this fellow,” he mused aloud to his guildleader. He found it peculiar but interesting. Instinctively, he reached out to touch the lion and clean some of the snow off from its head.
As Edmund’s fingers brushed against the cold stone surface of the statue, he felt a sudden and quick sting. He looked down at his gloved hand and frowned. Seeing no rent or tear in his glove, he thought perhaps he just imagined the sensation. Edmund reached out again to touch the lion when the guildleader interrupted him.
“Come look at this,” Wilhelm had already moved a few feet away, studying an area that had been disturbed. “Do you have a match?”
Edmund fumbled and reached inside his pockets. He waited for the guildmaster to unfold a screen he had in his own pack and sift what snow he could through the mesh, before Edmund used a match to help melt the rest of the snow.
“Seems we have a bit of wolf fur,” the expert huntsman grinned as he looked down at the mesh surface. “Odd thing isn’t it? Don’t usually see the likes of them around here. Unless they were hunting something, perhaps.”
Edmund could not help but feel a cold chill run through him. Suddenly it was much clearer to him that these woods he had always known were suddenly a threat to curious, vulnerable Elanore. It perturbed him how closely she had come to fending against a lone, likely hungry wolf. “Where do you think it came from?”
“It?” Wilhelm shook his head. “I don’t know that it was simply one. There’s too much disturbance of the snow in this area for just one wolf. Likely we have a pack,” he looked thoughtfully at the wooded area by the road.
Edmund noted grimly that the man’s assessment was consistent with Elanore’s earlier story.
“Let’s split our search here,” Wilhelm stood up suddenly, signaling that he was done with his investigation. “I’ll go west,” he looked at Edmund. “You check east of the road.”
Edmund agreed, although instinct told him to turn south and trace Elanore’s steps backwards to the next town, to trace the third set of tracks that he had noticed alongside the others. But his guildmaster was now much more interested in the wolves. He obeyed the man and headed east, in spite of this directive bringing him rather close to several abandoned properties.
After departing the road,he spent a good hour carefully looking for signs of tracks or disturbed portions of the woods. Eventually the cold began to gnaw at him, chilling his hands. Frustrated by the lack of any discoveries, he turned his horse back and followed along the sides of the creek that would eventually pass under the bridge. His horse neighed softly at the sight of the creek, apparently thirsty. Edmund dismounted and led his horse up to the creek’s edge to let it water.
There, he noted that the waters had melted the snows, bringing the creek levels up higher than normal. With a full winter still ahead of them, he wondered if there would be flooding come spring. As the winds picked up, he rubbed his cold fingers together as best as he could. Somewhat distracted by the sudden cold, he let his eyes wander over the area once again, eventually coming to rest on the bridge ahead of him. He wondered if there might be more tracks under that bridge and began to wander towards the bridge’s shadowy parts to investigate.
As he stepped softly on the muddy ground, he had the odd sensation that he was being watched. His fingers moved towards the hilt of his short-sword, strapped at his side. Quickly he turned about on his heels and drew the weapon in front of him.
There was a strange sound of metal upon wood as he intercepted a blow that was meant for his head. As Edmund turned fully to face his attacker, he was startled to find himself parrying the walking stick of Count Wolfram.

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Ooooh. this is getting gooooood!
Can’t wait for the next chapter!
next piece next Sunday
Welcome to the site!
Ehhhh? O_o Whats going on? ^^
The Count got grumpy after I forced him to relive his past?
hahaha you jerk ^^
xD -> More evidence of how much I torture the Count.
Taking bets for the coming fight… Place your bets people
My bets are tied, though, I like them both. ^^;
Elanore wins over them both hands down
Fight! Fight! Fight!
this is getting better with every update!!! can’t wait for the next one!!!
LOL. So many bloodthirsty females. Who thinks we like only romance? rofl -> myself
I’m a girl who frequently finds herself liking male-oriented series, who finds the girly stuff very girly. ^^v
Yeah, I’m a shonen manga genre reader (and a former superhero comic book junkie who thought Lobdell/Bachalo Generation X was the BEST marvel series in the X-book family), so I totally get what you’re saying. Still, I do like girly stuff — teas, dresses, cute things and really handsome men xD.
doo do do do do i’m lovin’ it. Don’t ask why that popped into my head. I have no idea. But I am truly enjoying the story. Especially now that we get to have all that pent up testosterone out and about. lol Good times will ensue…I hope.
And a bit of a fist fight in the snow would be quite alright by me.
(McDonald’s jingle in the middle of a comment? hahaha!)
Hm. I suppose resolving this with some tea and cookies isn’t going to work. hehe. Good to know, though. I’m going to revise what I have with this feedback in mind.
Ohhhhh this is getting good
I don’t want to wait for the next chapter though D:
I put my bets on Wolfram though, he’s my favorite XD
XD You have to wait because I’m still revising the next part!
Wolfram seems to have more fans. Poor Edmund. Now he really wants to become a vampire xDDD.
(BTW, hello and welcome to the official pool of “Those who comment”! )
Thankyou~ I’ve been following the story for some time but it never occured to me to leave a comment. But I’ve fallen in love with this story XD truely.
Oh. Dear god. If he becomes a sparkely vampire… I’ll.. I’ll… I’ll cry. Thats what I’ll do XD *now has the idea for an unfortunate event happening involving tar and glitter*
Wolfram is Daaaaaaaark and Mysteriouuuuuusssssss~~~ *insert sexy music here* What girl doesn’t like that XD?
Aww, I’m glad to hear that. And no sparkly vampires. But I might give him a haircut xD
(I’m not sure I like dancing Wolfram. No. Scary image xD)
I recently found this series and I must say I find it rather delightful. I usually never comment but when something seems off I feel I must say something. In the 14th paragraph you put Edward instead of Edmund, for a moment I was exceedingly confused and wondered when the character Edward had come on the scene only to realize it was supposed to be Edmund. I dare say, I don’t think Edmund would want to be confused for a glittery vampire.
LOL. That isn’t just awkward, it was a downright error. (And now I’m going to be stabbed by Edmund for it. *bleeds*)
Thanks for pointing that out! At least one good thing came out of the sleep-deprived update — and that’s wheedling you into posting xD.
(And glad you are enjoying the story.)
Funny you should mention the sparkly vampire, as you should see this. Ahaha. Poor guy. So unloved.
And if you do happen to remember, how did you find me? I would love to know!
ROFL! Poor Edmund! I actually stumbled upon it when I was looking at Toilet Genie, the page hadn’t loaded properly and I accidentally clicked on an unloaded part of the page which happened to be for your story! At first I was like “Shoot! I didn’t mean to do that!” But then I started looking at the page properly and got sucked in and started reading and became thoroughly enthralled and fascinated by the story, and now I am hooked! Can’t wait to see what happens next, I still can’t decide who I like more, Edmund or Wolfram, because both have characteristics I like. Wolfram for his mysterious and somewhat bold behavior, and Edmund for his honesty and obvious care and his clutzy moments are so endearing. Finding your images about the characters and the little teasing moment I find nice because it adds more to the characters with those candid moments. :3
Ah – Yeah – Toilet Genie is one of my favorite reads (and a place I advertise as a result). Glad though I could suck you in. It’s hard to transition folks from webcomic to written format. These days a lot of folks aren’t really as involved in online reading unless it’s for fanfic.
I’m glad Edmund and Wolfram are coming across as different men, albeit Edmund is way younger than Wolfram xD. As for the images , glad someone else is enjoying them other than me. hehehe. I like to think of them not only as blowing off some steam (as this story still is largely more serious than what I draw obviously), but also a good way to sort of cement what I think the characters are about.
Anyways :3 back atcha.
I know what you mean. It isn’t too hard for me given that I have tried (and failed miserably) to write a few stories of my own. One of them got about 57 pages typed out before I scraped the whole thing. I transitioned to reading almost entirely books to reading manga, to reading web comics. Finding a medium that is very much like a book but updates on a regular basis is very nice because I find that having a rather large book and having gotten to certain points I find it rather daunting to want to trudge forward. Especially so when you know something horrible is going to happen. Having the daily updates leaves you riveted on the edge of your seat waiting for that next update to see what is to come. Lol, but I need to stop spamming your poor comment box and I hope that people enjoy this as much as I do <3
I’ve definitely been there before. I trashed a few of my stories about at that point (50-80 pages) and others I managed to wrestle through after doing a few odd things. Writing online is a great way to force yourself to do it, especially if you can get a few readers encouraging you to keep going. Or at least if they can encourage you enough past that uphill battle where you are trying hard to establish their voices, their motivations, and the plot that keeps them moving.
As far as what I consume, I have found that I do read a large bit of manga these days, but asyou’ve noted, some of it’s the immediacy of the format and sometimes it’s just because I’m such a visual person I really enjoy drawings. That said, I read manga more for action/comedy/romance or slice of life stories. Those tend to be more fun to follow in the graphic format for me.
Glad you are hanging in here with the format. It never occurred to me that people would find this to be novel. Guess what’s old (fanfiction.net model) is new again!
And no worries about spamming the comments. I love hearing from you guys. Knowing that you’re all waiting for the next part is what makes me get up on weekends and force myself to write and edit xD
Yay update!! I was so last sunday when I remembered there was no update.. I love this story. I’ve never seen another site that does this although my friends and I have been attempting something similar..(and failing xc ).
aww. I hope not to have to do that much… but every once in a while life stuff happens
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Glad you continue to enjoy the story. Roundrobins or working with other writers can be hard if you guys have a lot of characters and plot elements to juggle. I did a bunch of roundrobin fanwork with writing friends a few years ago, and we did comedic stuff that didn’t require a huge plot so that we could simply have fun writing characters doing silly things. But I also did RP stuff and that could be very tricky since you have to really work well with another writer – have the same objectives and philosophy towards writing. I don’t think writing together is always that easy, but hopefully at least you’re having fun!
I think I asked you this before – are you guys posting stuff anywhere? Like livejournal or fanfiction/mediaminer.net ? Sometimes the pressure of putting it in public makes people buckle down in their writing.
You really do deserve more comments than you’re currently getting, so I guess I’ll try to start commenting some. XD I got directed here from the webcomic Phoenix Requiem a few weeks back, and have been avidly following your updates ever since. I think I’m going to be jumpy around mentions of water in your stories for some time to come after the last couple updates. I had visions of Edmund’s horse being gobbled up by unthings as he was going to let it have a drink just now.
Hellooooo! Actually, while webcomic authors are used to tons of comments, I’ve been told that webfic is relatively quiet in comparison. Considering I also used to write extremely odd fandom pairings, I’m used to toiling in complete anonymonity xD.
That said, I think you are right to be nervous for Edmund. I think getting whacked on the head (or almost whacked) is far better than accidentally walking into something. You’re on to something
What? Why would the Count do that? I don’t doubt he has a good reason though.
Just a heads up you’ve got a bit of a continuity error: you kinda made a big point in the early chapters to note how the snow covered Eleanor’s footprints, but then in this chapter they are still visible enough for the Guildmaster to see she was running. That really stuck out as odd to me.
Hi Zephyr – I’ll have to go and look how I explain this … Giles initially left town before the snows picked up. He left shortly after carrying Elanore and Hastings to town. Although I don’t explain it specifically – the sequence of inspection was
Count (up to bridge only) early morning, Giles (actually on and off the road beyond the bridge) (later morning), Edmund and the Guildmaster (later afternoon).
I’ll have to look at exactly to what degree I stated that the tracks were covered in the very first evening/morning of events (the Count’s assessment specifically), but hopefully in answering it addresses some of the confusion. The timing of chapters sometimes is not strictly chronological which I think does create some confusion.
Welcome btw to “the dark side of the commenting crew” and thanks for pointing this out.
@Puppetmaster, don’t think of it as the “dark side” of commenting. It’s a credit to your storytelling that people keep such close track of the story line. There are few gifts a person can have that are better than being a good storyteller.
I think everyone here actually has been great. (The comments are good feedback and catches, particularly with language that I should have used far more carefully.) That said, I’ve been concerned about some things I see occurring at other stories/comics.You’re right. It’s good that people love something enough to keep close tabs, but I also wonder if people realize that there’s an art to commenting too
Anyways, hello delurker! Welcome to the story