Chapter 20, Part A: Loose Ends


Time moved quietly in Winchester.

For three consecutive days the snow fell and the brave and stubborn found various ways to entertain themselves. In that time, the town’s current residents did little that qualified as interesting or exciting, but they went about their lives in ordinary ways. Letters were written and books were read. Stories were told. The young dreamed. The old slept.

But Mr. Williams watched. He was not very agile in his old age, but his mind and eyes were still much better than most of the young folk realized. Even though barely a soul wandered out and about, he sat near the curtained windows and looked outside.

Only the stubborn or those with extraordinary reasons wandered outside while the snow rained upon the town. He had observed a few odd passersby thus far. One was a woman who swept by in a large cloud of furs. She would always be going in and out of the inn. He could see the children waiting for her, their warm breath unfogging the upstairs windows while they looked outside for her.

He would see a young man as well, sometimes with her and sometimes alone. He knew the young man and guessed correctly as to where he would be going.

And, lastly, useless drunks ignored the snow and would wander to and from the pub at all hours.

At night, something else repeatedly moved in the treeline beyond the buildings across the square, something large. He mentioned the lurking shadow to his son-in-law who laughed kindly and said it must be a bear or a wild dog. But he doubted. It moved with a stealth and quickness that suggested a different purpose.

He wished the leader of the hunter’s guild would return. Or even the novice of the friar. They would listen. The hunters would seek out that creature. The novice would utter prayers.

There was something wrong outside, he was certain.


* * *

The stone lions had ventured towards the center of the town several times. They had come as close as they dared to the square to look at the fountain. It was a nuisance in their eyes, because it had been introduced there by humans and interfered with their various sniffings and diggings in that area.

They told Giles what should be done with the fountain. He gritted his teeth and told them to go on their way. And so they did, running about looking for ten things, not eleven.

When they could remember, they would use the creeks and avoid commonly used footpaths to avoid detection. But quite often a hole in the ground or odd patch of land would catch their interest and they’d run with abandon towards it, leaving tracks everywhere. As long as the snow continued to fall and covered their tracks Giles would not scold them. He was not interested in sacrificing timeliness for caution.

Edmund would look for them as he walked towards the Winchester home. Sometimes he would take a different path near the creek, hoping to find them. He had not seen the lions since that strange day at the estate. He sought them, wanting to ask them what was wrong with Elanore. Specifically, he wanted to know why the act of reviving them had taken so much of a toll on her. Occasionally he thought he’d see a beast out of the corner of his eye, but whenever he turned to look there would be nothing there.

He said nothing of them to Elanore when she was finally allowed out of bed to receive visitors. For a better part of a week she had rested in her mother’s room, with only the neighbor to help her grandmother tend her. His visit to her would be her first out of the confinement of her room.

She was pleased to see him, offering him a shy and tired smile as he entered her room.  He was equally content as he lifted her in his arms and gently carried her down the stairs to the drawing room. Her grandmother hovered nearby with a blanket as they sought out someplace comfortable to settle the young lady.

Once assured Elanore was comfortably resting on the sofa, the elderly woman gave the two young persons a meaningful glance and announced that she would be busy making the midday meal. She then withdrew from the room.

Aware that old lady had deliberately afforded them privacy, the two young persons fell quiet for a few minutes. Edmund paced the room while Elanore adjusted her blankets.

The young woman called gently to her friend. “Would you sit so I may see you?”

Chastened, he took a stool and placed it near her. Upon sitting, he rubbed the back of his neck with his left hand. “I’m afraid I can’t stay the day, Elanore. We have a boarder now. A rather fine lady, too, so Mother has a long list of things she says must be done around the house each day.”

She had noticed that he was dressed more formally than normal but was now in a better position to understand why. He looked well in shirts and coats, she had to admit. But she could not let the circles under his eyes go unremarked. “Have you been otherwise well? You look tired.” The healer reached across the space between them and placed her fingers over his free hand. “Are you working too much? Or is it your arm again?”

“No,” Edmund’s eyes moved to regard her hand, cold and dry to the touch. He turned his gaze back towards her, wondering how she could ask of his health! He paused, perhaps searching for what to say that would reassure her. “I’ve been keeping late nights reading. I suppose that I have had a lot on my mind. I’m trying to look for information about the kinds of things the old hunters were warned about in this area.”

The mention of ‘work’ appeared to satisfy her. She patted his hand. “I’ve heard grandmother and your guild bookmaster also talking about those things.”

He nodded. He had been privy to those conversations and generally understood that they had a time of trying to make sense of all the various books and tales. “I’ve been also considering some other things,” he deftly changed the subject. “I was told by your grandmother that you decided to move in to the Count’s estate.”

She withdrew her hand from his, startled by the sudden change of topic and the edge in his voice. “I realize how inappropriate it must seem. I know he hasn’t apologized to you.”

“It’s not just that,” Edmund exhaled sharply. “I know you likely will be working on your craft, trying to do whatever is asked by the Count and the lions. I don’t want you to fall unconscious or ill every time you do something they demand. Look at you now. If you keep at it like this, you’ll be dead within weeks at this rate.”

“Grandmother will come with me and keep an eye on things,” she raised her fingers to his lips to quiet him. “And when the preparations are done, you and your family and the others will be safer for it.”

He took her hand away from his mouth but did not release it. “I know your reasons,” he shook his head slightly. Her grandmother had told him and begged him for understanding. “Should we trust someone who seems so willing to let you sacrifice your own health to accomplish whatever he wants?”

“It’s not him I have put faith in.” She dropped her eyes and looked back down at the blanket. “It’s this magic he helped me find. I thought if I could prove the Count correct, then this might be the one thing I can do myself that would make a difference.”  Elanore closed her eyes. “I can do more than just carry messages and parcels back and forth between my mother and grandmother. I can be more than a passable healer.” Her voice trailed off and she gave him a lopsided smile. “I suppose it sounds foolish.”

Edmund understood. He did argue with the young lady. After all, he was a humble hunter looking for his past, hoping to find a future. “If that is so, I want to find a way to help you. A safe way. I don’t believe the Count values you the way we do.”

“Of course not,” she answered lightly. “I have no delusions that he actually does anything more than tolerate me. I’m much too plain and poor to interest such a man. It’s the magic that he cares about.”

“Now don’t be foolish,” he snapped. “People will presume that something is happening just like they did with us.”

“Old ladies always say things like that,” she scolded him. “Surely you aren’t worried about old wives’ tales?”

Edmund crossed his arms over his chest. “I’m afraid it’s not just the women in town but the guildmaster as well.” He found himself explaining himself rather quickly. “Whatever misunderstanding he has is my fault. I had approached him to tell him you wanted to speak to him about your mother. He was not pleased by my apparent knowledge of his relationship with her. So I explained to him that I was going to ask you to marry me and that what happened with your mother was of direct personal importance to myself.”

“Oh, Edmund!” Elanore reddened. She looked down at her blanket where her fingers nervously bunched up the quilted material. “I hope I haven’t ruined your relationship with him. He will never trust you if he believes that we were to be married.” Her eyes began to water suspiciously as she continued to ramble. “Although, I suppose he’ll pity you once every one hears where I’ve disappeared off to. To him I’ll be another hussy just like my mother.”

“You aren’t,” Edmund retorted. “I won’t allow it to be said! And he can’t find fault with your choices. There is a difference between saying one was considering and actually asking.”

The lady’s voice was grave as she admonished her friend. “Something like that shouldn’t be used as a trick. Think of the poor teacher who wanted to marry you.”

“Elanore,” he responded with equal gravity. “The only person I am concerned about is you. If he thinks poorly of me, I don’t care. There is nothing he could do to me to hurt me. But if you must hold me responsible for such a small thing, then I must ask you to consider how then we must take responsibility for how I compromised you.”

Her color deepened as he referenced the incident from the other day. “It was I who compromised myself,” Elanore protested softly. “I thought I told you the kiss was their idea.” She looked a little uncertain at that, however. Her recollection of her various explanations were hazy, a likely effect of the enormous power she had used to waken the lions. “Hadn’t I?”

Wryly he responded, “You had, but I think the lions were full of mischief that day. They wanted me to feed you first. How they could demand food one moment for you and then that you kiss me the next is incomprehensible.”

Elanore’s shoulders rounded as if she braced herself to be scolded. She knew she had been too trusting.

But instead, Edmund smiled. “These past few days, I’ve wondered what was on their minds that day to make such a peculiar request. Their view of us is childish in some respects, but as I thought through what happened, I realized they were more intuitive than I.”

She glanced his way. His voice had grown stronger. “What was that you think they knew?”

He reached out for her face and let his fingers rest upon her cheek. “They knew that I wanted you to kiss me.”


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Chapter 20, Part A: Loose Ends — 22 Comments

  1. I’ve resisted commenting but now I can’t anymore! Please let the romance develop from here, I can’t believe he finally had the guts to tell her he loves her! Oh, Edmund and Elanore, they’re sp perfect for each other!
    I hope you realize that if they aren’t married or engaged by the end of the story I shall hunt you down. They just have to be together!

    • You are the lone voice in the wilderness xD. I really can’t say very much with respect to your requests though. I have a feeling people are going to be hunting me no matter what I do . heh.

  2. I don’t know. lol To have it develop from there is just too…predictable. lol I personally am rooting for the Count and Elanore. lol

    • True. But sometimes there’s more than one way to do things. The cats … they are kind of a bad influence :3

  3. Y’know, I think I’m going to have to agree with at least one of the comments above… I think I’d be kinda annoyed if Elanore and Edmund immediately moved into romance from here, especially since I’ve been getting nothing more than ‘friendship’ and ‘sisterly affection’ from what I remember of Elanore’s private thoughts. Then again, I’ll admit that I have at least a slight preference for the Count over Edward as Primary Romance Interest, so my opinion is probably biased.
    BTW, was that comment about the well meaning that it was over one of the energy focus things that the lions are looking for, and Giles thought they were just complaining because the well was annoying? (sigh) I think I really need to go back and read the archive again… I can almost feel my brain rotting in my skull, I used to be really good at remembering little details like this…

    • ^___________^

      You forget I’m an evil troll who is planning for TWO books featuring this particular set of characters. Nothing ever happens that is final or resolved.

      The fountain is bothering the lions because it does seem to be related to one of the things they were looking for, or quite possibly obscuring it. It is a bit hard for them to investigate though because to do so, they’d have to jump into the middle of the town square. They told Giles to do something with it or about it, but he told them to scram xD.

  4. Hmm I agree with the Count and Elanore being a better match. At least in my opinion. Elanore is strong and she would be fine with the Counts more serious attitude by her side but Edward is just… Brotherly. I honestly don’t want any romance to happen there :/

    • I honestly do not think that it’s possible to decide teh better match right now. 😉

      • Oh I don’t want you to yet! It’ll ruin the rest of the story. But in the end I’m rooting for Elanore and Count to end up together 🙂

  5. Nooo the count is the. Person who should say that he loves her and then she would say I love you too plz let it end with something romantic between those two 🙂

    • Maybe? To be honest, this storyline isn’t really a one-shot, so I don’t expect to resolve things concretely for a while yet!

  6. I’m really glad to hear that this isn’t the point where the romantic relationships get resolved. I feel that we don’t know the characters (any of them, including Elanore and Edmund) well enough to have a good idea who would suit who in a strong, long-term relationship. Also, neither Elanore nor Edmund have gotten to know the Count or Ilva well enough to really know either of the currently rather mysterious formerly betrothed duo. I think none of the potential romantic relationship characters really know and understand each other well enough for them (the characters themselves) to come to any solid conclusions yet, either. The two who know each other best are Edmund and Elanore, and even though they grew up together, they’re still working on getting to know each other as the people they are now. The other two characters are not only much newer to Edmund and Elanore, they’re also way more cryptic and less open, so I think it’s going to be quite a while before Edmund and Ilva or Elanore and the Count have any more than just surface impressions of each other.

  7. Already saw one of my predictions come true … there must be some magic also in Edward 🙂

    Well, about the Count and Elanore … I would still rather fall form him than for Edward, BUT not for an engagement, for sure. I mean, with his longevity, it might be fun to share his life for a few months or even years, but as soon as one starts withering and dying alongside such a man … no. Wouldn’t want that, neither for him, nor for me.
    And so, for the long run, I would opt for Edward for Elanore 😉 But she shouldn’t let the opportunity for some adventuring pass completely …

    • Edmund … yeah, won’t spoil it, but he is really our archetypical fantasy hero. He just doesn’t know it yet xD.

      LOL at the “Elanore should experiment” bit. Someday I’ll write a more typical harem story for ladies, but this won’t be it.

  8. I do wonder why people find it so difficult to grasp Edmund’s name hahaha (must also say I am glad to find an ally in MK in the comments as I too wish it more him and the Count to be with Elanore, at least so far to this point).