Chapter 4, Part D: The Wolf Past I


Maximilian did not realize until much later the importance of the timing of the elven healer’s intervention. Had his family stayed, there would have been considerable trouble for his family and even more attention from other persons with more power to cause trouble for them. But for the moment, the wandering elves were a kindly and oftentimes amusing guard for their journey north. It took more than a month; such was the way when traveling with minstrels, who did not proceed in a direct path anywhere.

They traveled under cover, keeping their heads covered such as to blend in well with the rest of the elves. They ate with them and listened to them as they conversed around the fire each evening.  He was happy, listening to their stories and songs, and being shown the ways of the elves.

They parted ways near a small creek that they said marked the beginning of the terrain of the Wood Elves. There, several of them, along with a few human men were waiting.

As they approached a bridge marked with a stone guard and could more clearly see the faces of the men in this new party, he saw his father’s face light up.  They greeted one another as if they knew each other well. As the men bowed respectfully to his mother, shyly he hung back, with his fingers held tightly in his mother’s hand.

“Hello there,” the eldest of the men leaned down to greet him. “You must be Maximilian,” the man smiled.

Max stared back, wondering exactly who this man with the staff in his hand happened to be . He looked up at his mother for a moment wondering how to respond. When she nodded, he looked back at the man. “I’m Maximilian Wolfram. I’m named after my grandfather.”

At this precociously rendered statement, the men about them began laughing uproariously, only to be stilled when the man gave them a rather terrifying glare.

“I know that,” the man answered gently. “Because it was I who insisted on you being given that name, lad. One day you will understand why.”

“You’re my grandfather, aren’t you,” Max blinked astutely at the older man, who nodded mutely, perhaps a bit overcome by some emotion that the young child could not quite determine for himself.

“Come,” his grandfather said gravely, holding out his hand. “Walk with me, and let me show you this place where the Wolves of the Northlands dwell.”

Without hesitation, Maximilian dropped his mother’s hand for his grandfather’s.

Together, they walked across the bridge.

Vote for this story at Top Webfiction


Chapter 4, Part D: The Wolf Past I — 6 Comments

  1. Hmm, interesting. I wasn’t 100% sure how you were going to do the wolf bit, but I like how you’re doing this so far. I keep getting annoyed every time there isn’t a ‘next’ button at the bottom. Just when I’m engrossed again, the story cuts off.

    • The wolf is one of many more mythological figures in this series, but it will be some time before it’s clear who the others are (as I have yet to unfold the larger story that ties in with his past)…

      Thanks for your patience over all with this format. Yeah – it’s hard to read just a bit at a time, but it’s the only way I can write and stay on top of things (aka “deadline”)… x)

  2. Yes, it’s no fun waiting for the next bit of the story. But it is very engaging & therefore worth the wait IMO.

    • It’s interesting thinking about this — I think I’m used to waiting for serial content (since I read webcomics),b ut I wonder if this is hard for those folks who read voraciously to sort of jump in and out. It’s something I’ll have to think about for the next arc.

      But in the meantime, I’ve been thinking that I might simply incentivize this process for folks by providing something that others who drop in later might not have access to. Any suggestions for content (art or text) are welcome… I’ll consider it!

      • I tend to be one of those voracious readers, but I find that if I just scan over the previous page a bit it usually reminds me right where the story was when I last left off. The storyline is unusual and engaging enough that I can pick it right up again pretty easily. Of course, that may be because I DO read so much. 😀

        If you do think that your readers may have trouble with the update schedule, maybe a link to a “What’s happened so far” page might help. If you were to just add a bit to it each time you add a section it might even be fairly easy for you to keep up with. Not adding strain to yourself while helping others is always a bonus. 🙂

        In any case, I’m thoroughly enjoying your story-telling and world-building, and am looking forward to seeing what happens next with this. Keep it up! 🙂

        • That’s an excellent idea that I’ll try to implement soon. With the complex shifts back and forth (and at least one more occurring a few chapters down the line) this sounds like a great way to help people reshift gears 🙂

          Thanks so much for the comment and glad you are enjoying the story!